Blue ocean,
Blue skies.
Blueberries,
Blue eyes.
Blue birds that sing,
Thank you, God for all the blue things.
A contest entry
- KIDS VS. ADULTS by longlife by longlife.
425 points, ended June 26, 2008, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I really like this "blue" poem so MUCH! May I please post it on the poetry blog I run for a newspaper in California? It is called Poetry Planet and it is a G-rated poetry blog.
We encourage students to post their poetry there. Of course your AP popcorn name and copyright would go on the poem. 
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Bluish!
Good job. Its short but its nice. My MOSTEST FAVORITEST color ever is Blue! Great choice for a colorful poem.
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I LOVE IT. My FAVIOIRTE part was when instead of hust saying blue ocean,blue skies,Is when u said bluberries thats clever to me. Great job
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Ooooo I'm noting there's a colour theme
Blue is my... second favourite colour? Mainly for the skies and seas... I'm a beach junkie ^^
Cute write!
I think I'll continue through your poems
Claire x
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Wow... this poem was cute and very original. I enjoyed it A LOT. Nicely done!For some reason I'm hungry now... lol.
Thank you for sharing this piece with us. It was certainly a well done write. You seem to have a lot of talent... perhaps you should submit something into my contest? Ah, anyway.... uhm, welcome to All Poetry!
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nice....
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Welcome to AllPoetry
Very sweet write
I adore the colour blue and all things blue
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good poem... keep writing.
-slick99
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.................... Odd... Heehee, it made me laugh though. Nice, i liked it in a weird way. ^-^
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