My head reels with emotion
as I think about a days trail.
"What could I have done different?"
A lone stranger I see in dreams,
and I can't place the face to name.
"Did I do you a wrong?"
A new position every half hour,
yet no sleep comes....
"Why?"
Author notes
Around 40 - 50 brilliant words. (50)
Prompt - 'Sleepless Nights'
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A contest entry
- PIF/10/40/Prompt by AliceinPoetryLand.
850 points, ended June 5, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What to do in an insane world?
Comments
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Beautiful!
I love the spacing and font change. You are finding new ways to emphasize your ideas. A simple idea executed well got you the gold.
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Wonderful! I love your take on this. Beautifully penned indeed. Thanks so much for your entry
Gaylene
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Beautiful take on this prompt ~ I love the wording and structure you have used best of luck hun
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