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Hearts and Minds

 

 

 

Dogs tear my flesh
I am the baker, Asad Ferran

I am naked
cock shriveled in the laughter
of the soldier woman
she points, sneers
I cannot understand anything
except my shame

Spit on the Koran, they say
wipe yourself with the Prophet's words

I squat for days
unable to stand or die
in my excrement

They ran electricity from a auto battery
through Husain's testicles
he screamed, fell in a seizure
they threw him against the wall
he fell down again, pleaded for his life

He is a taxi driver with six children
his wife is dead
they aimed their guns
he wept like a baby, wet himself
they laughed and dragged him away.

I am tied in a lump of filthy, naked men
Karim's penis is jammed against my ass
my face presses into the shitty buttocks
of a boy who weeps constantly

Dogs tear at my flesh, I shut my eyes

the battery they used reminds me
of the one in my old truck
that the children would surround
in Sadr City, shouting for cookies
the truck of Asad Ferran the Baker

 

 

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Author notes

Painting is by Fernando Botero, one of his new series on the torture of prisoners at Abu Ghraib.

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  • you should get this out there more...besides just on here...maybe send it to that painter
  • intense


  • TheM0of silver member
    June 6

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    Disgusting is a word that falls short of the events you describe here.

    To encourage such a disgust in the reader, given the subject matter, is a worthy goal. Society must be made disgusted to the extent that such events as the shame of Abu Ghraib may come to an end, and we may no longer need such poetry as this.

    I appreciate your efforts. I am glad to be so disgusted by unflinching portrayal. I should be concerned if I had not responded so.

    . Rewarded 8

  • your writes of late have been so gritty and gut wrenching... i love botero's women, they remind me of me!! the shapes and curves... but that painting disturbs me a little, i find myself wanting to bite my nails, like i do right now after reading this piece

    it's the dog's bollocks D... yepp... grit and grime and sludge...



    G.x

  • sgking123
    June 6
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    excellent

    you dow rite well...you have to tell me how you devloped on this idea
  • OK....

    Well, this is for sure different. The photo is hilarious, and the write matches with it perfectly!
    WELL PENNED!
    POETDONTKNOWIT
    WRITING IT HER WAY

  • Amera gold member
    June 4

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    This is powerful! You rip into the reader's heart and thrust the sword of your words directly in to it. Very impressive writing.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • malmadre gold member
    June 3
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    One image that caught my attention in all of the photographs and also this painting is the sterile glove. Our soldiers so well trained to protect themselves against blood borne pathogens and excrement, so they come away clean from their deeds. The pathogens might find a way into their conscience one day...
    Gripping words David


  • Dalaney gold member
    June 3
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    ...i don't think i breathed at all reading this. my God. Love, Lane

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