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Your best moments were away from me

The weather is displaying my inner torments…

The sky is arguing with dark clouds- why they are making the sun to cry so often.
The clouds told the sky if they go far away, then drought will arise slowly; but asked the sky and the sun if they really want that kind of freedom, the clouds would disappear, just to satisfy the wants of the couple…

When freedom is painful, is it real freedom?

Tears wrapped the Love, suppressing each time the latter’s growth. When it was not the moment (oh no, not the right time), you mixed love with sex, smile with cry and talk with shout.

You left me as a thief; returning back the stolen diamond as a sign of good intention.
Ah! Empty again, hollow…

I am searching for you everywhere as if someone who lost something of paramount importance; peace of mind they call it.

I am a fighter who can not even fight for he cherishes the most.

But look!
Look on whose bed you are sleeping, sharing morning café, spending time with or taking care of? Just look…

You chose your way, far away from me and what I could possibly offer,
Your best moments, away from me

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Is a sunny bright day really beautiful when you don't have the one you cherish by your side? - weeping sun

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  • Legion.As.One
    July 25

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    A well written piece, good job. Whilst I'm not a fan of this particular style, you've managed to impress me . Good job and good luck!


  • Myjoy gold member
    June 17, 2008

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    This is truly heart ache at it's best. I feel for you in so many ways for I too have felt and been delivered this kind of thoughts. Good luck, and keep your head up.