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ex parte.

Dim the lights
enough to write
my words into the darkness
i am speaking through the hues
that inhale hot halos to spew
out ice-white lightning bites alight
thread up your speakers
to spit out slow sounds and
not sneakers; wear danceshoes
where soles have a blues-soul alone
in beauty and tone, pose and press
every mess of your head to my chest
your impressing my heart; crowd applause
i am for what your for; i'm supplying
the hardest goodbyes to your war
against leaving behind every sweat-imbued pore
to fill up many more
will you crunch to my cracks
will your spirit speak back
are your liqour of lyrics love-laced?

xx




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  • DolphinLass silver member
    June 6, 2008
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    very descriptive well worded write well done


  • no-way-ap
    June 3, 2008
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    amazing

    amazingly awesome as usual i lve your voice and vocab, its pretty much amzing.