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Elegant as you

As i kiss you softly
while you lay in my arms
i begin to search
the past years of
my life
i come to find
that i have
never seen anything so elegant as you are

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  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    June 3, 2008

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    aww this again is so beautiful,
    peaceful and you can just feel the serenity,
    keep penning, all my love,
    kitty xxx