It's Saturday... 7:46am.
I've been waiting all morning.
Purple pajama pants.
Lace blouse from last night.
Wake up!
Bubble gum lipstick
smeared down your cheek.
Is that mascara on your fly?
Shit! The champagne crashes
to the floor from my shaky hand.
Startled, you stare at me-
like you're looking at a unicorn.
A pretty pink unicorn
who's drooling whipped dreams.
"Good morning," you scruff out...
"name's Jeff.... wanna get a latte?"
In a list
A contest entry
- One rule. by fullfathomfive.
750 points, ended June 14, 2008, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I loved the ending!!! Humorous in how awkward it would have been
Well penned poet, this was an awesome write.
~QoA
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Thanks for the entry!! i reallllly like this... especially the 'whipped dreams' part. it's like the worst and best sides to a one night stand. i really like the imagery here.
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Hahaha... wow that's funny. Best part ""Good morning," you scruff out...
"name's Jeff.... wanna get a latte?" - really made me laugh. Couldn't have ended it better!
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oh my! so family is supposed to set an example for the younger ones right.....? hahahahahahhahahah i loved this!!
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yikes! busted!
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Enjoyed this one too. Glad Lowell Poe did as well. THANKS!!
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Wow I love how this poem combines elelments from the innocence of childhood with elements of a one night stand, and both sides are a little extreme... Sort of makes me think of how these affairs are only games. I love this. The only phrase that seemed a bit awkward was the "pretty pink unicorn", that sounded a bit cliche to me. Except for that, just wonderful.
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Your a bad little girl.
You need to be spanked.
and who's Jeff?.....lol
Nice job,
LIAM
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Awesome~!
So very dirty indeed, I love it.
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its ggod
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hi
so what gioes through your head when you r writing poetry like that
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thanks
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this is so dirty
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