Her eyes are like stars
in the sky
and I can only remember the colors of fall
The orange it brings forth
the pencil's eraser is being used more now
as she realizes her mistakes
what a sweetheart for trying
She smiles as she gets one right
The blue ribbon in her hair
as beautiful as a the dragonfly
I love how she says "Awesomeness" at least
a billion times a day
and yet it still jerks you with surprise
and this novel has got to come to an end
even if she doesn't want it to
she'll always have friends who will miss her
and her absents will get to them...
one of these days
for every time
I look at her
music plays within my soul
But sad to say this book is coming to an ending
it's time to say or good byes.
She's all grown up...
and now when you look at this beautiful women before thee
You almost her her saying "Awesomeness..."
and you can almost see her smile
But most of all you can almost feel that silent,loving music playing in the soul
of your heart.
Author notes
I chose Option 2.The words I used were
Eyes,stars,love,remember,sweetheart,dragonfly,colors,music,
fall,orange,leaves,blue,smiles,friend,ending,awesomeness,
eraser,pencil,ribbon and novel...IDK if you can use a prefix or a suffix on the words...If you can then i might have used one or two more.Anyway I am confusedperson.And last but not least"A beautiful lie" and I think it is 30 seconds to Mars?I don't know...
A contest entry
- Options Contest by Simply Simple.
1000 points, ended June 7, 2008, 83 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this is good
use of color related to growing up and how it may feel later as an adult silent , loving music in the soul of your heart, wonderful approach and using the words in word bank. good
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GREAT!
ror u!
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AWSOME
awsome!!!! good EVERYTHING i really like it alot! i could never write a poem as greatly writtin!! -
This is beautiful. Your wording is very good, and makes one want to keep reading. The story is quite imaginative, and told in a very sweet way. Great job, just one thing, spelling-wise, and it was probably just a typo or something, absents is spelled absence, but other than that awesome!
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like thanks 4 the comment peeps
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wow
This is crazy good to me it seems like from the perspective of sdome love sick boy is that were you were coming from I like it a lot good job =D
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Amazing!!!
I love it!! I really do. What a perfect use of the word bank! Yay! Thanks for entering and best of luck in the contest.
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OppS! I 4got LOVE!!!♥My bad!
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