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funny money

money is funny
it turns lovers fickle
as it trickles away

best friends and good food
slowly wither
as you slither out
from under it

billie wailed it out
for us
it could bail us out
of a sticky spot
but god bless the child
who got his own

born into it
or
die cos' of it
still god bless the child
who got his own

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god bless the child : billie holiday : song prompt

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  • Rovingone gold member
    June 10, 2008
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    Wonderful, and whimsical and so very true! And, just like the song. You did good!


  • Kari gold member
    June 10, 2008

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    I loved this! Thanks for your entry


  • BehindTheShadow
    June 3, 2008
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    I love this one, completely. Of course, it does have a touch of rhyme...