Violate me in every way that you can,
Touch my body baby just use those hands.
Start from the top to the bottom from bottom to the top,
Don't worry baby i won't tell you to stop.
I want you to kiss me in the places were you can take your time,
just love me boy part 2 to MAKE YOU MINE.
i want to love you and feel the love in side of me if you no what i mean,
mi amor just Touch My Body
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oooh... very sexy poem ..
gave me shivers!
*touch my body*
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Thank u 4 the comment its good 2 hear from again its been a while luv u
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very hot and erotic, just the way i like them.
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Thanks
Thank u sweetie 4 the comment ill b changing it soon and i want u 2 read it again when i do luv u
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An Inside man
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very hot and sexy. lol. ^^
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TBH I don't get along with erotic writes, they often sound cheap, like noticing a faded page from a porn mag on the sidewalk and catching a seedy glimse of what's on offer. Yours is better than some, in the way you have composed it, but sadly it still leaves me cold.
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well im sorry that you feel that way but all erotic writers are not the same. but like i said on other page i am an understandig person cause some are going to like what you do and then there are some that are not but i also have plenty of other poems on here that you could have read if you dont like erotic. and i for one dont find it that bad and even if there is a poem that i dont like im not going to go around on anyones poetry and send negative thoughts if any thing im going to tell them how they can improve there work and i dont think that it makes me sound cheep cause im not i am 17 years of age and im still a virgin and if any one else wants to no i can tell them the same because i have no shame in any thing that i do or say i put down the truth and nothing but. my poetry are my thoughts and the way that i feel at that point and time so i thank you for the comment and if you dont like erotic you dont have to and you shouldn't read it but have a blessed day
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da Da Da DAAMN!!!!
All I can say is DAMN!! How do you do it?
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idk but mayb i show u better than tell you
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aww gurl this is very touvhing i love it great work!!
keep up the great work
<3<3
TragikChickie
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nice ma i like this right here i think you did a very nice job with this here
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thank you is there somethin that i need to change or somethin that i need to add or should i make it longer
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Nice
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thank you
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Hot, this boy must be going out of his mind
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thank you
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very nice, i would love to hear someone say that to me
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thank you
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LOVE IT!!!
one of mah faves
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'Violate me in every way that you can'
Very gracious indeed!
'Touch my body baby just use those hands'
I want to use my hands and each part of my body to touch you, my love!
'Start from the top to the bottom, from bottom to the top'
I'd make sure all options are explored
'Don't worry baby I won't tell you to stop'
Once I start playing with my doll, I won't stop even if you ask to do so, honey!
'I want you to kiss me in the places where you can take your time'
I'd take my time in each place I choose
'I want to love you'
Who'se stopping you, sweetie!
'and feel the love inside me if you know what I mean'
Yes...I do know what you mean...
and I'd do it in such a way that you'd moan and scream...
and would ask and crave for more, my love!
Great!
Gracious offer!
You're wonderful, cutie!
Kissessss all over!
and much more!
Galaxy2
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SPEECHLESS LOL omg! good fuckin job lol
xoxo- christina
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lol thank you
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ur welcome hun *hugs*
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