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For You

Sitting here
Worried
Not knowing how to feel exactly
Sitting here
Wishing
I had a silver blade
To hide my feelings from the world
When you close your eyes what do you see?
Sitting here
Wandering
Just exactly how you feel
I'm so confused
I'm still broken
My spirit wolf,
She is still faded
Puttingon a smile that isn't even real
Faking every good feeling
When I feel nothing but pain
The pain of loosing you
After just now finding you
I'm scared
I'm cold
I feel so very alone
And yet I know you are there
But I can't feel you
I can't see you
I want to feel you
I want to see you
I got scared laying there in the dark
Coughing and shaking
You called out to me
You opened your mind to me
I want so much to open up
I want so much for you to open up
So I sit here
Worried, wishing, wondering,and waiting
For you

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  • SexyAngel0418
    June 6, 2008

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    awesome cassie!!! Who is this one for??? Very beautiful and very well written!!!!

    Hugs,
    beth


  • The Grimm Poet
    June 4, 2008
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    Your an amazing writer my love nice write.
    I love you so very much.
    grim

  • hardeepb
    June 3, 2008

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    Beautiful

    A love I am missing...torn from me. This poem represents me to the fullest. Very powerful, connects with me perfectly. 10/10.

  • limechic
    June 3, 2008
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    So real...

    This is a really amazing piece of work...shows the pain of loss. I can really relate to it!