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Invisible feelings.

You walk near..
My heart begins to beat
you walk past without a word
My tears begin to seep.

You take me for granted
you never notice my pain
All you care about is her
oh, how you drive me insane.

Your arms around her waist,
Make my words into tears.
When your with her,
makes minutes feel like years.

Why must you torture
this already broken heart
oh, why must I feel
that im being teared apart.

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  • Lislaine
    June 4, 2008

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    waw waw waw... loved the flow of this one!! really good... thx 4 entering... hope you enjoyed and GOOD luck