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Whispers


Whispers of the dead
All I hear when I listen
About the child abuse
The horror in this world
That's why  I have a PowerPoint

To say what needs to be said
Erase the hate Stop child abuse
You'd think others
Would hear them to
Whispering of hurt
Neglected children 

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whispers thats the one i picked

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12. Wispers (thats the word i used)

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    July 15, 2008

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    Intensely but softly expressed this is a wonderful write using just the word Whispers


    Thank you & Best of luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • a-face-in-the-crowd
    June 3, 2008

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    Oh wow, this is an original way to take the word. This is such a powerful poem.
    "You'd think others
    Would hear them too"
    Wonderful.


  • Stargazer-Rock
    June 3, 2008

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    A very good sugject to write a poem on.
    I really like the way it sounded, I believe this will stick with me all day.