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Oh How It's Been So Long

Everyday is like a new begining
A chance to breathe in the toxic morman ginger snaps
A final time to break the light of day with a fist
Haha Ha Haha Ha
Don't we just smile
When the wind begins to howl
The wolves are eating babies tonight
Haha Ha Haha Ha

I'm so sorry I've been lost
In the depths of my dreams I sleep
You are next to me and you drool on my teet
Haha Ha Haha Ha
Stupid dead butterflies
They want to eat taco meat
But I can't cook so I must die
Haha Ha Haha Ha

Oh how it's been so long
Since the last time I felt so great
But now you know that I love cake
Haha Ha Haha Ha
Can we be best freinds
Jake is a retarded douche bag
I want to meet him so I can eat his brains
Haha Ha Haha Ha

I hate all of them
The ones who don't dance around the fire of the grape
Babies are going round and round
Haha Ha Haha Ha
Lets just dance around
We can have fun in the town that is close by
And we can even drink Orange Soda like Kel
Haha Ha Haha Ha

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  • Indeed
    June 3, 2008

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    wow... ross Tells me he would bang this shit out of this poem if it was a woman..
    Weird, man..
    you've turned my brother over to you're side.


    • ThatColinKid
      June 4, 2008
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      Well thats simply because I am amazing, and you know it's true.


      • Indeed
        June 4, 2008
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        haha! I was kidding about the Ross thing, though. but the poem was fully entertaining.


  • Great Cthulhu
    June 3, 2008
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    Surreal

    This appears to be the psychosis of a mind lost in the minute folds of society. Thoroughly enjoyable and beyond strange. (spell check is your friend, I promise!) This is my favorite line: "The ones who don't dance around the fire of the grape" - impressive imagery!


  • erica kiwi
    June 3, 2008

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    Hahaha!!
    i was reading this.. and laughing outloud.
    IT WASN'T DROOL ON YOUR TEET!
    it was tears. [:

    this was incredibly incredible.
    like maroon colored Mac and Cheese.

    ...i'm still laughing..
    hehehe.

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