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Rainstorm

Rain goes into the night
As dark as the atmosphere.
In an instant, lightning strikes.
Not knowing what to do
Strangers call strangers in the
Tangle of heat that flows through the
Outer room like a river flows through a
Rain forest.
Moments, seconds, hours pass until the passes.

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