daddy
i've told you so many times,
it hurts so much,
that it's so hard.
to see that look in your eyes,
it's deadly
daddy
don't torcher yourself like this,
it hurts me just as much.
she's tairing us apart
when we need each other the most,
and your letting her
daddy
don't fall into her little trap.
don't let her tair us apart.
don't leave me when i need you the most.
DON'T RUN AWAY
daddy
its just as hard for me
and it hurts just as much.
so don't let go...
not now, not ever
Author notes
i love him so much but my stepmom doesn't want me arround an that makes it hard shes tairing my family apart and the only one who could stop her doesn't know how!
A contest entry
- Anyone? Anyone there [For anyone] by RawrSmileBabyPlz.
450 points, ended June 26, 2008, 36 entries
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Thanks for entering! This poem is so heart felt.. i Love it so much. Its sad and the feelings come through. very expressive.
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Wow. This is kinda sad. But its very well written and i like it alot. My favorite part is when you said "don't leave me when i need you the most. DON'T RUN AWAY" that was worded so good but yet i think that was sad. thanks for entering my contest. I wish you the best of luck.
..<3..
Shelly
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This was very sad. I am sure it must be really hard for you. Just a few things:in the 2nd verse it is torture not torcher, tearing not tairingand you're not your. In the 3rd verse it should be tear not tair. Good poem other than that.
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