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I have a friend that lives far away
I just cant help to say-
I love her so much.
Id give her 100 hugs, kisses, and such
I cant wait to see you another day
If there could be another way...

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    June 5, 2008
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    This is an interesting take on the prompt... I think you need an apostrophe in the word 'I'd'... but apart from that this is a good poem... have you shown this to her? I'm sure she'd love it - or if it is fictional - then well done from writing from another perspective... thank you for your entry!

    Keep writing

    Polly