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meandering


shadows call my questioning mind
to quest
almost invisible wind blown
ripples soothe the midnight sea
reach the sand before my wandering
footprints arrive
silent testimony instead of always
purpose

Author notes

prompt: "aimlessly drifting, peripherally occupied"

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    June 5, 2008
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    This is a very beautiful poem - the tone is wonderfully created and the ending is softly sweet... I really like the imagery and the way it paints pictures in the readers mind - interesting take on the prompt thank you for the entry to my contest

    Keep writing

    Polly