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spring lane







spring lane -
water rushes past
the speed limit









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  • quakietree
    June 9, 2008
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    Great haiku! Interesting picture.

    qt


  • azure85 gold member
    June 6, 2008

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    spring lane -
    water rushes past
    the speed limit

    Oh, that is just the way it is with those sudden storms, good use of descriptions, thank you so much.


  • between slices
    June 6, 2008

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    oohhhhh I love this!!!
    I love the highway and speed comparison you've used, that too with the image of spring where everything is so vibrantly fresh and energetic!
    your word choice is just perfect.. love the play in the first line. ah, how I envy your mind's pen!!
    btw, who was on patrol??

    the only complaint: your choice of BG colour feels like it's winter, not spring..