Walking on careless waves across
lingering years of doubt;
down the alleyways of cobblestone,
limping from the weight of the conscience,
still carrying the world in a picnic basket,
calmly awaiting the vision of a dove and a rainbow;
see it and set yourself free.
Author notes
I hope you like it!
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A contest entry
- Short Poems - Prompt by Polaja.
1000 points, ended June 6, 2008, 22 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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well written poem good luck
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Thank youu!
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I like the tone of this poem... the take on the prompt is interesting and well created... the imagery is wonderful - I especially liked the idea of carrying the world in a picnic basket... beautiful words
thank you for entering my contest!
Keep writing
Polly
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Thank you so much!
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yes i liked it it said a lot for such a short poem ,well done and keep writing
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Thanks!
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