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Russian Roulette

Forced conversation starts
while the cold instrument opens-

Breathe...

Words say things about the son,
the daughter, the funny things they do..

Tap and poke
followed by a serious pinch..


One can only gasp,
before the conversation picks back up.
Time expands longer,

as sweaty palms grip the chair.

Hurry and finish-
please get that out of me..


Counting the specks of grey to white,
splayed across gypsum ceiling

Something trickles, flows
staunched by nitrate gun.

It's blessedly over..

Closing the door upon exit,
anguish fills the sudden sob.

The blood-filled trip
into never-should-have-been land.

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  • sOuL
    July 1

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    I promise nothing will happen to you, cute pie i will hug you tight and keep you far away from all the darkness, sadness or sickness


  • Musimwa
    June 24
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    Excellent

    Great, u deserve the trophy. I love your imagery. Keep this up.

  • Wow, you really did that justice. Who would have ever thought that subject could be handled so beautifully and poetically. Congratulations on the Gold.

  • Congratulations

    So very pleased to see gold on this stunner. Superbly done. Congratulations and positive thoughts. ~Pamela

  • Amera gold member
    June 4

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    Oh my! This reminds me of the dreaded trip to the stirrup table. It’s as bad as the other required trip to the chest squeezing machine. You nailed the excruciating experience perfectly.

    Love,
    Amera♥

  • This left me silent and stiff. A truly stirring and sterile accounting of procedure. The conflicting emotions are incredibly intense. Superb. ~Pamela

  • I know what I think this is about Very well described, almost TOO well!! Yuck!! Best of luck in the contest.

  • Wow, what a wonderful description of self-coflict. Bravo.

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