Of life and love
and all above
Of every thought
And every Idea displayed.
Every nook and cranny discovered
Every Place is found
Every secret, mystery uncovered
Hearing every word or sound.
Knowing whats happened
What the future holds
What brings us here?
and whats untold?
How strong how Bold
How weak and old
Keeping hold
Of what we know.
Starting new
Starting fresh
Begining Life
With single breaths.
Displaying emotions yet untold
Letting worries soon unfold
Going back to good old times
Bedtime books and nursery rhymes
Missing life the way it was
The problem is perhaps because,
A bad response
To A Temporary Renaissance.
A contest entry
- anything your heart desires, prewrites, new, everything! by wendymolly.
555 points, ended July 27, 2008, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything you want by whispernthedark.
745 points, ended August 22, 2008, 42 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
like it? and please don't comment my punctuation.
Comments
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This is a thoughtful and refreshing poem. I liked the description of new experiences, broadening horizons. The last stanza says it all. But is it really a BAD response? maybe the response itself is temporary. Thanks for making me think.
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There is a renewal to this that I like. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
♥
whisper
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d this!
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The problem is perhaps because,
A bad response
To A Temporary Renaissance
I liked the last lines I think they summed up your whole poem great job and thank you for sharing this piece with us. -
I was curious as to what someone calling themselves "lazybum" would write under the title "A Temporary Renaissance"!
...very interesting!
unfortuatly I don't get the punch!
I really liked the main body of your poem "lazybum"... it brought to mind Bob Marley's lines:
"Every ripple on the ocean,
Every leaf on every tree,
There is a deeper meaning to the world..."
I didn't understand where you lost Bob's faith in the world...
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I likes it, like most everything you write, good job once again boi! *pets*
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I liked it alot~!!!!!! you gots some talent...keep it up...I may be visiting you again later on in this crazy life. XD. Ttfn
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