What are you looking at?
Yea you are checking it out
You are looking at others poetry
In my mind there is no doubt
Reading those OTHER lines
what mine aren't good enough for you?
Well then thats just fine
I can read other's poetry too!
Oh, you are thinking of someone else's
lines even right now!
Aren't you? Don't lie
You are! OH WOW!
How could you do this to me
I've worked so hard for you
I guess now you're going to say
I just lack self esteem too.
So along with you thinking
I can't write a poem good enough
You also think that I think
I'm ugly and stuff.
I know that you will think
that I'm overzealous
Don't even say it
I'M NOT JUST JEALOUS
A contest entry
- PIF Contest-paying it forward...June 3rd judging will begin-.picture is Feminine GREEN EYED MONSTER by ears2hearyou.
300 points, ended June 6, 2008, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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YOu so deserved gold on this one, great job on your entry
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LOL, very clever take on the prompt and an entertaining write. Well done!
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Laughing and Laughing
so smartly and cleverly done..........
and you dear poet have just won the GOLD !
Your ingenuity and fortitude has been recognized!
This was a wise wise poem to be enjoyed!
laughing and laughing and laughing, oh the sonnet
writer's poem was so lovely, but this really
stole the show VIVIDLY making earning all the points!
ears/Seattle
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Thank you very much for your kind words, thank you for picking mine for the gold. Glad you enjoyed it, jealousy wasn't hard for me, I come by it so naturally :-)
Lorijo25
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