Life for Love
Love for Life
The white dove
Or black vibe
To make a decision
All you need is emotion
My eyes or ears
Neither seen nor heard
My mind or heart
Neither thought nor felt
The emotion we need to decide
Whether stick to love or life
Its been rented out wide
On my back i carry a note
I don't make decisions, i intend
I don’t own emotions, Its for rent
A contest entry
- Whatever 3rd part by milkgirl.
415 points, ended June 19, 2008, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please help me to turn to be a better writer
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Great
Hi, im new so kidna exploring the site came across your page, and im lovin the poem, Great emphasis on the human mind how we love see and feel the world. -
Beautiful
so often we cannot mix the two in one either love is not good enough or life just screws everything over... one day we will have the part of life where love is our life and life is our love..."My eyes or ears
Neither seen nor heard
My mind or heart
Neither thought nor felt" love those lines brilliant
Zia,
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I don’t own emotions, Its for rent
freaking brilliant! good luck! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! ~CarnalNineTailedFox -
Ahh..congrats for the Gold..the words are true liike the golden sun..I love the emotions brought here..well done...
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Great job! Congradulations on the gold trophy.
I liked these lines
Whether stick to love or life
Its been rented out wide
On my back i carry a note
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this is a small but very strong meaningful poem
i like the meaning of the poem
though i am not sure whether i caught your meaning or got my own meaning
anyway you have done a great job
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thank you for joining
this is my first contest
i wish i can handle it
please open another contest if you become the winner -
Such a wonderful sharing of emotions! I felt the sadness at the ending. Very nice indeed.
Blessings~
Az
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very nicely worded. i like it.
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I like this...short and to the point...but quite impressive. I also love the flow this piece has.
Thank you so much for your entry and I'm sorry for the delay response
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Superlative!
Superlative piece of poetry here dear fellow poet...marvellous theme and words penned...I don't make decisions, i intend...
I don’t own emotions, Its for rent.. brillant ending couplets with great passion and insight...tk u for sharing...PS
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i am giving you applause
i think this poem deserve it
take care
i really like your poem
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yeah its good words and good meaning
Life for Love
Love for Life
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I don't make decisions, i intended
I don’t own emotions, I've rented
i really felt these two phrase
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Forgot to applaud
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wow brother whoever you are you are writing very good i love it, specially
"To make a decision
All you need is emotion"
this is a truth of life
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