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You're the angel in my dreams
The one I love more then anything
You lift me up when I fall
Without you I'd be nothing at all

Your dark brown eyes
Stare into my soul
My hands are yours to hold
My heart is your to take

Hold me close, don't let go
Look into my eyes
Now we soar through the sky
With you I can fly..

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so yeah this might not be amazing but I wrote it so that counts for something, rite?

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  • For You. I Cry.
    June 26, 2008
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    omg this is deff my favorite i love this alot! great amzing work hun


  • HeatherXx
    June 5, 2008
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    I love this so much..and i finally made a profile.. i only put one of my poems from last year up there.. it was not the easiest thing to do.. bc NO ONE has ever read my stuff b 4.. but i love yours. you have a gift, my dear. beautiful. i love it.

    love,
    heather.


  • XRainbowliciousX
    June 5, 2008
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    hahahhahahhahaa. yes.