I see the art, upon the wall...
And photographs, all down the hall...
I see the toys, laid on the floor...
And the open, bedroom door...
I see the little, sleeping ones...
And pray their dreams, are filled with fun...
They are my treasures, sent from above...
My greatest joy, my greatest love...
I pray for them, every night...
That God will keep them, in His sight...
I protect them all, the best I can...
But after all, I'm just a man...
So to Him I trust them, with all my heart...
And pray from His love, they will never part.
A contest entry
- 203;203;203;203 ;203;203;&# 8203;​ ;;​;​ by xxlisajazminexx.
780 points, ended December 26, 2008, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Happy Moments by Good Mourning Moon.
700 points, ended December 26, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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this is gorgeous! so lovely and sweet
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amazing write..... beautiful dedication
so sweet
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Simply beautiful and a heartfelt dedication
to your children. I wish you well in this contest
and thank you for sharing it here! Good luck to you!
Jeremy0826 -
great cadence, I really like the pace of this one... It rhymes just enough as well to make it really lyrical to read... nice write..
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