Have at it then!
I'll cut you down!
Your throat is mine!
This blade will be your demise!
I swore my vengeance!
Now your debt will be paid!
Get up!
Quit your whimpering!
You're going to die, but do it like a man!
Shut up!
Stand up!
It will be over soon!
Come on, then!
Hit me!
Fight back!
Its no fun killing you if you do nothing at all!
There you go!
It doesn't hurt so bad, now does it?
Come over here now!
Time to end this once and for all!
One slash and it will be over!
Your life is in my hands.
Now die!
Author notes
i dunno...i just heard epiphany from sweeney todd and felt compelled to write something creepy.
A contest entry
- Write me a poem... about anything you want! by RainbowGirl257.
500 points, ended July 22, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
...is this guy mad or what?
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you've really captured the aggressive feel here. i like all the exclamation marks at the ends of your lines, makes it really feel like someone is shouting all these things. thanks for entering and good luck
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Well done write
So often from what I have seen with so many of the young people today its as though revenge results in someones death . Where revenge should be getting to the top and leaving ones behind that cares nothing of others .Stand up and know to inflict pain on those who cares nothing for life often pulls you down to their leverl
Yes I would say he is infuriated to a dangerous level
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eh, it was creepy. but pretty good. i think i'd have to hear it read for it to make a full effect. but i liked it, and i love sweeny todd.
<3
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