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Perpetual Fantasy

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              relaxing to dream

              sensation covers me

                      a gentle nibble,

                      cheek caressing,

                      arms embracing,

              gentle and tender

                      I drift,

                                  feeling loved






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Sensual Quickie
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  • who iam
    July 23

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    Passionately irresistible

    Imagery is great...!
    Words that entice whom ever reads...!
    Like the touch of velvet or silk upon the skin;
    "gentle and tender"
    A moment that would last a lifetime.
    Well done,
    Glad to see you are back.

  • darrylblacksr
    June 12

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    I too enjoyed your sensual quickie, it made me feel so soothing in a place of a dream that I would never like to end or wake up from. I thank you for sharing this treat with me... Thanks...


  • SexyAngel0418
    June 10

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    aweosme!!! i really like this sensual quickie!!! You did a great job on it!!! Very well written!!!

    Hugs,
    Beth

  • TXCowgirl
    June 3

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    You have such an "easy" way with words, so gentle and tender and yet very meaningful. Me likes!
    TxCowgirl


  • TheRealDeal
    June 3
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    Such sensual thoughts fvill the mind and lead me into a world of wonderment and desire for those tender nibbles, caressess and touches. I can feel you here and if I could, I would respond with the greatest of pleasure. Your words flow as smooth as melted gold. Good luck in your contest!
    JLG

  • ian sawicki silver member
    June 3

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    a good soft opening, i can feel the tension in my shoulders evaporating already, i like the nibbles, they induce smiles, on the beach of love spirits may drift as the waves gently slap seduction into wonderful grains of golden passion.


  • Balldinger silver member
    June 3

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    Ignition...

    of all the nerve - that's how it feels when all the nerve engages in actions of word and picture such as this. just getting started becomes the sexual ignition. the explosive point can be a needle in a haystack, or a flood without control. nice quickie... NEXT!!!


  • faderman1959 silver member
    June 3

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    what an excellent quickie! It was so good I would want them over and over!


  • leo2
    June 3

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    It's nice to know that a lady has the same kind of dreams as I do. Your presentations are always top shelf. I wish you well in the contest.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


  • Ithica silver member
    June 3

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    Ah!!! I can remember days like this... Filled with uninhibited affection and quiet contentment... Just beautiful!!!


  • Texas Tornado
    June 3

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    MMMM love this one! can feel such tender sensual emotions from this best to you in the contest


  • Blooming Poet
    June 2

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    Beautiful. the wording is amazing here. I love how well this poem flows, that takes some poetic skill. Loved it.
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