let me melt
away from here
into our secret
world
so we can be
free
take my hand
and follow me
from everything
that holds us
apart
let me dance
with the light
and may it glow
with no end
for it is light
that connects our
souls as one
it has been awhile
I must say
things have changed
as we have changed
and I hope
to dance once
more
my love,
so far away
from me
and I know
your love
will never
come back to
me
my heart's
last string
stresses on
your words
as you
strip me from
my dignity
with them
I'm sorry
I get lost
in thought
of melting
in your arms
let me dissolve
in you
so maybe
you will
finally
love me
and just melt
with me
never will you
so I can only
dream
as you tug
at my last
string
A contest entry
- Lose Yourself in Words by myusikah.
425 points, ended June 11, 2008, 17 entries
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Comments
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Very Nice
I'll try to comment without sounding generic; although it never seems to work out. Like the rest of the poetry you write, this is necessarily emotional and intelligently heartfelt. Every stanza flows while their containing lines radiate a focused theme. By the way, how have you been?
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That is really intriguing! Its cool, I like it!
Good luck!
--> pia♫♪
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