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It was always you...

 

I walked away
          to look for perfection.
Uncertain of what i would find.
Replacing you? 
                   Quite impossible.
'Cause in comparison

                   you always rated higher.

A sudden realisation

                 caused me

                 to stop searching.

       And my soulmate?
            It was always you.

Author notes

20-40 words.

Prompt:
---All my life I've made excuses
Pushing you away, saying that you're not for me
All my life...
I tried everything
In the end it was you--In the end by Kat Deluna.

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  • cadtip
    August 28, 2008

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    I love it! Its the imperfections that make a person who they are... i am learning slowly to love all of someone not just what i think i want.... Kudos for the work... your very talented.


  • toxicangel
    August 25, 2008
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    i love this, i think many people can relate to it, i know i can. Nice one
    x


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    June 17, 2008
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    Nicely worded.

    There is no perfection. Only imperfections we crave above others.


  • Tercil gold member
    June 5, 2008

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    First of all, perfection is a high climb to compel, yet it takes by the end of the verse that this is not the perfection, but what is right to balance it. I loved your realisation, good insightfulness in this, excellent in fact!


  • sykotic
    June 3, 2008

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    wow, first of all congratz!!! and second of all, THANK YOU... i know it's never easy tofind your soulmate and you often tend to overlook those right infront of you... best of luck on this exquisite piece

    it took me 9 years to find mine by the way


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    June 3, 2008

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    Aww some times we think the grass is greener and go to search other pastures.. when what we really needed all along was right where we were!

    Beautiful sis and VERY deserving of the silver!

    xx


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    June 2, 2008

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    Oh and she said she thinks it sucks!!

    what the no way, I love what you did with the prompt darl
    Strong words, perfect placement..delivering of everything

    Thankkkks and good luck


    Cin

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