Denying..
You were the one
Covering me like raindrops
Loving me anyways
I had chased other rainbows
While you patiently
Enveloped me
With your sunlit fingers
I returned to you
Like your lost sunset
Author notes
Prompt...All my life I've made excuses
Pushing you away, saying that you're not for me
All my life...
I tried everything
In the end it was you--In the end by Kat Deluna.
A contest entry
- QUICKIE... :) by MaMa-2-be-Cindy.
700 points, ended June 2, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Yayyy congrats on your Gold!! I'm glad I sent you to the contest.. you took my place while I went to the gym, and I'm glad you did! I'm also glad I wasn't competing against you!
Such a lovely poem with beautiful metaphor!!
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love the metaphor you used
this is deep and wonderful..skillfully written , had a great flow
Thank youand good luck
Cindy
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