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Raseleanes' Death

Bloody blade from battle true
dripping warm from battle wounds

clacking steps from heels of gold
marked with strides true and bold

settles curls of fires warmth
eyes of emerald shimmer forth

blood hands out reach her body
settle on her prays folly

steely woman set in battle
crying now with out her mantle

general of the human legions
brought down by ally bleedin

sword of faith sheathed in chest
lovers blade resting hence

crying first tears of battle mourned
on a lovers face, red rivets form

out breathes final breath
dripping tears of bloods innocence.

Author notes

About a character from my comic book. She is a general of the humans in the demon wars, and she was the best warrior they had, but in the final battle she is betrayed by her lover and killed.

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