Desperately seeking for a better me
Not knowing that the better me
I could find in you and I
Maybe that's why my answer never came
Because I was pushing you away
Author notes
Prompt: All my life I've made excuses
Pushing you away, saying that you're not for me
All my life...
I tried everything
In the end it was you -- In the end by Kat Deluna
A contest entry
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700 points, ended June 2, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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"because i was pushing you away* sad!!! I dont know what to say but i really loved this poem!
Warmest,
Mylee -
This is an awesome poem. I know what this feels like. I am still eeking a better me and I guess that is why I am not married yet. I enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.
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wow, some profound thinking with flowing words , a wonderful take on the picture, deep. Thank you
and good luck
Cindy
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