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I have a fire.
I have a poppy flower.
Smile.

You stole the ocean and my eyes.

I'm left with what I lost
and
all I got is in the making.

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The California animal is a bear.

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  • Axelle Black
    June 4, 2008

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    yeah. oh wow. haven't been on here in a very long while. And i'm glad that the first poem i read on here in a long while is genius.


  • acoustical
    June 3, 2008
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    "You stole the ocean and my eyes."

    ohh. wow.