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Gone

You've always been beside me
with love in your eyes
those eyes...
that give me butterflies
but i said no to you
and in the end...
i see that i loved you
but i said no...
and now you're gone.

Author notes

---All my life I've made excuses
Pushing you away, saying that you're not for me
All my life...
I tried everything
In the end it was you--In the end by Kat Deluna.

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  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    June 2, 2008

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    great poetic thoughts here

    i love that pic, me and my mum wrote a collab for it just the other day hehehehe

    You did well with the prompt and I thank you, good luck



    Cindy


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    June 2, 2008
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    Hey,
    Good luck.
    Nice user name.