I fell in love became a believer
then one night,
one girl;
heart crushed yet still forgiving
journey just beginning.
Author notes
Prompt, poem is inspired from.
"In your book of broken hearts
You had my name, now the story starts
We'll never be the same again I know"
- Prisoner Of Love, Foreigner
In a list
A contest entry
- 10/20/20 Quickie.. just to make me feel better :) by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended June 2, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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CinfullyDelicious
Nicely done. Dear. Congratulations on winning the Bronze trophy you did a great job with the prompt.
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Oh wow sis, this was so beautiful and powerful ending! I can definately relate to this, really touched my heart. Great write & congrats on the bronze
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Thanx Darl
Luv ya too
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Awww so in love and just starting out on the journey together, you lucky things you!
This could never happen to you 2 
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no way could it hehe
has in th epast but not my sweetie matt never
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to forgive is devine and all that I like the forgive mistake's take for we all make them to vering degrees of course but w do. I have two rules in love well two things I can forgive but wouldn't stay with 1) a hibitual liar 2) cheat on me everything I can and do forgive. Nice write and good luck in the contest
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Aww.. it very hard to forgive once the heart has been crushed, but if you can, a new journey can indeed begin! Great take
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That's a story as old as anything.
Only you are forgiving. Well writ!
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I think you just nailed the prompt..very well written!!
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This isn't crap dear, it's so pretty. You wanna read crap, read mine
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aw thanks, im sure yours isnt either lol
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Good luck, friend.
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