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The Same to Me

Swimming in the depth of your sea
flying in the skies of your world.
Singing to the birds you unleash
flowing to the magic in your eyes.

Painting the colors in your heart
lying in the warmth of your bath.
Sleeping in the nest of your soul
dreaming in the apex of your visions.

Dancing to the music of your song
serenading to the window of your spirit.
Breathing the freshness of your garden
cupping the flower of your ground.

You, do the same to me.

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  • DeGraw
    June 17, 2008
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    Lush

    Like a garden of words That I enjoyed strolling through!


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    June 3, 2008
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    Oh this is adamant in this knowing....really pwoerful strong writing.


  • LaMerci
    June 3, 2008

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    HEY SIS!!!!

    I've been so busy I hadn't a chance to stop by and check you out but I see you're still wowing them as usual with your wonderful and delicate sense of romance with the music of your words.


  • Kiran silver member
    June 3, 2008
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    Beautiful...this was very romantic and serene, lovely poem.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    June 2, 2008

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    ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL

    Wow so magical feeling! A nice walk through the mind and soul of a true romantic! lots of luck in the contest my friend!


  • myusikah
    June 2, 2008

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    That is beautiful, I really liked this. Sleeping in the nest of your soul. Incredible!
    Good luck!
    --> pia♫♪

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