I am screaming
For resented sin
My broken heart
My bleeding skin
My apathy
Is killing me
This love is nothing
In the mirror I’m nothing cause that is all I see
The price is blood
A small amount
Small worthless scars, on my useless wrist
To many to count
I want to die
I want to fucking feel this
I want to feel this nothingness
That is me, I’m useless
So see me now
The cutter in full view
Fucking feel this pain
Cause in the mirror is you.
Author notes
i Totally forgot i wrote this, it was so long ago, and yet brings up so many bad memories.
A contest entry
- Dark! Love! Hate! Pen it! by darkhawk.
300 points, ended June 11, 2008, 11 entries
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Bloody Brilliant!
Kid...you are KILLING ME but...you have talent. -
You know some people would be apprehensive to post or show something they wrote a while ago. Because they feel that it does not emit the same emotion or feelings they feel at this present time. But post it and learn from it I say.
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Quite well written. It seems like it carries a lot of emotional baggage along with it.
It's good. It's just so... tangible, I suppose that's a good word. I feel like I can reach out and touch this and feel the reality in it. Nice work. Few can accomplish at state of realism.
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Painful, but eloquent.
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i realy like this one...i love it when the f-bomb is dropped in anger poetry =]
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It's got a lot of self-destructive power. In my eyes it's quite good for a cutting poem.
Now Imma check and see if ya other stuff is all about cutting or if there's anything more interesting in the collection =)
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You'll find alot about cutting, alot about suicide, alot about dying, but also about love, idea's and hate.
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