Soft gentle strokes
like pen on paper
Pages of an amazing journey
of flesh and lust
Binding us together
FOREVER
Author notes
"In your book of broken hearts
You had my name, now the story starts
We'll never be the same again I know"
- Prisoner Of Love, Foreigner
A contest entry
- 10/20/20 Quickie.. just to make me feel better :) by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended June 2, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Sweet~ I really like how you have taken love and made your reads read it like a book...very good and thank you for sharing
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Thank you
Thank you so much for all of your kind comments
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This is amazing, truly captivated me as a reader. All the best
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Thank you
Thank you so very much. I have been working on a potential novel today. I would love to hear your opinion on it. http://storywrite.com/story/173610
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Aww this was so beautiful hun! Loved your expressions of journey of love- two souls together. Wonderful write!
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Thank you
Thank you so much this was fun, I tried to take the love and turn it into a book
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well you did go the other way with the take and I do like that! Nice metaphor like pen on paper well done and good luck in the contest
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Thank you
Thank you so much for your kind words.
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wooooo I like your take on the prompt! Best of luck to you!
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Thank you
Thank you so much for your wonderful comment
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Ahh like the positive take on this prompt! Sounds like an amazing journey indeed!
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Thank you
Thank you so much, this was a fun prompt to wake up my muse with
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