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Crimson Wire

There's a thin line
between our love and our hate,
our hugs and kisses,
our fights and silence

Salty tears stain
rosy cheeks and satin sheets
sleepless nights
peer from behind drowsy eyes

I look at you
sitting across the room
and I feel tears straining
and a hole ripping in my heart

The distance...
it kills me
but even when you're close
you feel so far away

Like we're both on a different side
of a crimson wire of the heart
and we are trying to find a way through
but in the end... we fail.

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  • Fallen Grace silver member
    June 6, 2008

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    I really love this poem. You did a fantastic job on it, the love and the sadness, its beautiful. Absolutly amazing. Thank you very much for entering this masterpiece in my contest.

    Great job and good luck in my contest!

    -♥
    Beautifully-Bound