Gazing into deep pools of liquid Jade
Frosting your soul like marmalade
Deep stories you have and hold
Like feelings of pain that you’ve told
Your eyes show a glimpse of sin
With dark emo Jade boiling within
Intriguing, like watching water boil
Stay true to yourself, and always loyal
Never let those pools of Jade fill Onyx black
Because that beauty, you will never get back
Don’t ever let too much Onyx enter your soul
Or forever your life will remain un-whole
Author notes
♥love you girl♥ christina
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A contest entry
- my eyes! by Lonely Christina.
950 points, ended June 3, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Eyes by BabyBun.
450 points, ended June 19, 2008, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Largest Contest On AP!!!! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
3000 points, ended August 26, 2008, 1668 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Within Your Eyes. by Poetryintheblood.
450 points, ended September 26, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you for your beautifully worded entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Great use of colour - good luck
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lol i love this poem for two reasons... one is that it's beautifully penned and two is 'cause it contains my name
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hmm nice take on this babe! love you so much hehe totally describes me
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