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♦Jade♦Pools ♦

Gazing into deep pools of liquid Jade
Frosting your soul like marmalade
Deep stories you have and hold
Like feelings of pain that you’ve told
Your eyes show a glimpse of sin
With dark emo Jade boiling within
Intriguing, like watching water boil
Stay true to yourself, and always loyal
Never let those pools of Jade fill Onyx black
Because that beauty, you will never get back
Don’t ever let too much Onyx enter your soul
Or forever your life will remain un-whole

Author notes

♥love you girl♥ christina

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  • Poetryintheblood
    September 25
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    Thank you for your beautifully worded entry, good luck in my contest, Josie

  • BabyBun silver member
    June 19
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    Great use of colour - good luck

  • sykotic
    June 9

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    lol i love this poem for two reasons... one is that it's beautifully penned and two is 'cause it contains my name
  • hmm nice take on this babe! love you so much hehe totally describes me