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[ my eyes eagerly devour ]

my eyes eagerly devour
the words they read
they're your words
written with love
& I know they are
just for these eyes only
but oh the sadness
because their all gone now
so I'm begging of you
down on my knees
please write more
cause this hunger
for more of you

is insatiable
you can't possibly know
how strong my
weakness for you is

Author notes

i read the weakness thing somewhere idk where or of who i dont remember so i hope no one minds i just used it
kinda got a bit of a writers block right now and not too much time to write so i just copied this off of something i wrote a long time ago

don't be nice, please

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  • pancake
    June 16, 2008

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    ooooo. loved it. it was so simple yet left such a strog image. that was fantastic. x that was great hun. and i know what you mean about a writers block but that was still just great. it was just fantastic. really wow.


  • The Great Disaster
    June 5, 2008

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    This sort of reminds me of my favorite books, the girl is so into the guy that he's all that her life revolves around. My favorite part is:
    "you can't possibly know
    how strong my
    weakness for you is"

    Amazing write.


  • ikeiloveyou
    June 3, 2008
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    writers block?

    ha girl! i loved it so much! so much power packed into one short yet intriging?-is that how u spell it- poem it was great..i love reading your poems you put real emotion in it :]]]] <3


  • she still smiles x gold member
    June 3, 2008

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    aww

    This is so great!! I loved it. It was short, sweet, and simple, which made the poem stand out more.

    *they're your words
    written with love
    & I know they are
    just for these eyes only*

    Wow, those lines really touched me..and made me think of someone

    Beautiful write!

    <3


    • ucancallmereal
      June 3, 2008
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      yay glad i could reach you like that ;]
      if that makes sense. well thank you!!!


  • alwaysapartofme
    June 3, 2008
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    it is a good. girl even if you have writers block you still write good poems!


  • endless-lover silver member
    June 3, 2008

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    you say not to be nice..
    well sorry doll
    when one has a good write thats all you can be
    good poem loved it keep them comeing take care love lots..xoxoxo

    endless


  • XNevermindX
    June 3, 2008
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    Awww, this is so sweet. Lol, you are addicted....=P


  • TakenforLife
    June 3, 2008
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    wow I really like this! It is good write Awesome job!

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