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Only She Is Beautiful To Him

She has dull, grey eyes
And thin, brown hair
But he needs her
More than air

She is far to tall
Doesn't like what's "in"
But all he cares about
Is within

She's not popular
And she's bad at gym
But only she
Is beautiful to him

When you see the way
He looks at her
Your whole perception will change
Your image of the girl will blur

What once you saw
As dull and plain
Will be transformed to grand
His view you will sustain


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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 8, 2008

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    Ah..I can see the twist of the love in the verse, especially in the second last stanza moving this prompt strongly..thanks for sharing it...my friend..