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In The Darkness of Night

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There was once a castle in Cornwall
twenty ghosts roam the halls and the grounds,
a murder had caused dark days to befall
and the hanging man sways and astounds.

 


A little boy tugs the ladies skirts
soft laughter is heard in the breeze,
the young girl dances and always flirts,

the Monk keeps watch and sings to appease
sounds of dragging stabbed bodies diverts.

 

 

Secrets always stay here in the Castle

whenever you're visiting Cornwall,

be sure to stop in, it's no hassle...
In darkness of night you will recall
friendly ghosts you met here at the Castle.

 

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  • HaleyMary
    October 13, 2008

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    beautiful write. The poem seemed to have a beautiful, haunting feeling to it. Castles are beautiful places and for a castle to be haunted makes it all the more mysterious. Congrats on winning the trophy. I'll be by later to read more of your poetry. Keep writing.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    June 18, 2008

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    excellent~

    Right up my alley
    I wished Ghostly Encounters came on now
    Loved this sis
    Best of luck in the contest
    Hugs
    Your sis
    Susan~~~


  • tawk gold member
    June 4, 2008

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    Wow such a mysterious and haunting write! I so enjoyed reading. Good luck in the contest Theresa


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    June 3, 2008

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    Well done! I am glad you went to the links! Great use of the data. The castle does indeed hold many secrets. Thanks for this entry and good luck!


  • Desire gold member
    June 2, 2008

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    Wowzers!!

    My brain I swear has been on a hiatus and wish I could pay You to write for me
    Geesh~~ Love Your take on the prompt and the rhyme too
    The more I read, the more I am intrigued at the happenings within this castle
    Now I want to go
    Keep that quill dancing~
    Wahoooooooooooooooo
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~

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