my love the wine that intoxicates your heart,
my caress the morphine that paralyzes your thoughts,
my kiss the sweet poison upon your lips.
Take this bottle within me, in the last gulp you kiss me
as my love consumes your soul.
Inside a crystal bottle that holds my heart
my love the wine that intoxicates your heart,
my caress the morphine that paralyzes your thoughts,
my kiss the sweet poison upon your lips.
Take this bottle within me, in the last gulp you kiss me
as my love consumes your soul.
my love the wine that intoxicates your heart,
my caress the morphine that paralyzes your thoughts,
my kiss the sweet poison upon your lips.
Take this bottle within me, in the last gulp you kiss me
as my love consumes your soul.
Author notes
DrkPoet
50 words
Prompt: "Take this bottle with me
in the last gulp you kiss me."
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF quickie; 10 entries; 50 words by Spiritualangel by spiritualangel.
480 points, ended June 5, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Darkly Wonderful!
Loved the depth of this verse...says so much in so few words. The pic and the background are simply perfect for this write! Thanks for sharing!!!
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Inside a crystal bottle that holds my heart
my love the wine that intoxicates your heart,
my caress the morphine that paralyzes your thoughts,
Beautifully penned. Best of Luck. -
Excellent
Very creative and well expressed. Best of luck in the contest.
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short and sweet, but definately proves a point.... love it!
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Very interesting, I was expecting something waxing, and dark when I clicked it, but this is very different than what I expected. It's shortness seems aburt, but at the same time it leaves a powerful feeling. The line 'sweet poison' usually seems cliche somehow, but you took it and made it your own. The image and wallpaper add to the imagery that the poem creates. You really can't add much to this. And I'm surprised that you don't have a ton of comments on this.
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