These razors will be my death
This sweet addiction...nothing can compare
No stopping me so please dont try
Such a tragedy...end this misery
Overwhelming pain consumes me
Pathetic am I for these downfalls
Killing me slowly
Blades so shiny and silver
Blood so pure and crimson
Cuts so deep and painful
Scars so flawed and imperfect
Body mutilated
Addicted to this self harm
Why do I seek this type of comfort?
Story of my life carved onto my skin
Pain stopping by only causing more
Empty forever
Author notes
option #2
- Cutters Noncutters and ExCutters group list • next in list
A contest entry
- Emotions Crying Out {Options} by newnoakua.
550 points, ended June 16, 2008, 92 entries
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just a buncha feelings lol
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great poem i love the detail
my favorite line is
"No stopping me so please dont try"
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thank you. glad u liked it
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omg i love it evn though its mostly depressing
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lol thanks
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Another amazing write from you! Full of emotions about cutting. I love those, since well, I was an ex-cutter. So, I use to have feelings about cutting (duh) but I am, soo trying to stop, but I bet you know, it's a bit hard. Great write, and again good luck in the contest!
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lol thanks
oh an excutter, well i just wna say im very proud of you! yes its very hard, i cant stop
but thanks again 
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This is a good poem.
Good luck in my contest!
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thanks!
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This is a really great poem,
keep up the good work,
Thank you for entering the contest.
And good luck
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umm thanks again lol
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Thanks for enering my contest, i really enjoyed reading this, becasue i am also a cutter. Good luck in the contest,
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ur welcome. im glad u liked it
xoxo
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i know this far more than i should loved it
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: awwww *hugs* glad u liked it tho
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This is a very good poem, you are right we might have a lot in common! this was a very good poem..it was very well written and i can definatly relate to it
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thank you *hugs* yea lol we do...yay
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You know i just realised that you are a poet beyond compare... i love your work so much! This is so painful to read, i could feel your pain through it for so reason, yet i engoyed it.
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omg hun...thank you so freakin much lol once againg thnks lol ughh *hugs and kisses*
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Your great. I also cut. I love the details you put into discribing the razor, and the blood.
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awww lol thank u hun...hope you have ur own way of dealing with ur cuttin problem
xoxo
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This is awesome. You are an awesome writer. This poem has a lot of emotions in it. Amazing!
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aww really? thank you hun...glad u liked it!
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"Story of my life carved onto my skin" hun you are an amazing writer- this is my favorite line. ^.^
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awww *im so blushing* glad u like it thank you so much
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babe this is definitly filled with ur true aand raw emotions...i understand it so well..and dont seek any1s help to stop it either...well great job
lindsay
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thanks..
i love your view on it all *hugs*
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