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The You're an Asswipe Poem

You think I can't forget you,
you think I can't move on,
but look behind these hazel eyes
and then you'll find you're wrong.
I'm done with you, you mother fucking asswipe
and that's all I need to know.
All we had is gone.
You're now a memory that has moved on.
So what pieces are left to pick up?
There aren't any you stupid shmuck!
From what we had to what we thought,
was it all some stupid joke?
Well listen up you stupid fool,
since you left me,
this damn joke is on YOU!

Author notes

This is dedicated to the bitch who broke my heart.

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  • flyingphoenix
    June 10, 2008

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    Very angry! but i liked it. The emotion coming through is very raw!

    thanks for entering and good luck!

    sunny


  • markgrif gold member
    June 2, 2008
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    I love it. Nice use of profanity.