I don't want to live another minute without you
Nothing brings me pleasure no matter what I do
The hours drag endlessly as if on a snails pace
as I long for once again to look upon your face
Nights are so miserably cold and too dark
me without you is too empty and stark
I miss you so much more than mere words can say
Help me through this time I do desperately pray
Author notes
Prompt: Missing You More Then Ever
In a list
A contest entry
- quickie by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended June 2, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please be courteous and comment..NO rude or critical critiques please.
Comments
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Oh so deserving of gold!! Beautiful border and background. So expressing of wanting to be love and the power over one when is goes astray.
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Holy Moly!!
Aaaaaaaaaaw this is one Precious piece You have penned and tugs at the Heartstrings
Love how You took this prompt~
Accompanied by the border~ Magnificent
Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Gorgeous
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