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4 letter words

Oh the four letter words
Hate, love, envy, pain and wife
Those that fuel the emotions
Sometimes its as simple as “life”


Me holding you
Scraping away the past
Holding your soul
Pushing it to sunlight at last


In your sleep you battle history
unable to change or reconcile
what you've done who you were
hiding it in daylight behind a smile


That was then - a lifetime ago
try another four letters
bring yourself to now
"live" by being and wanting better


Author notes

dont know really where this went - it started a few nights ago - my wicked muse is a night owl and I was too tired to get up and write all the words that fit then.....

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  • Rose Angel gold member
    November 6, 2008

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    Am sensing a challenge with someone who needs to be encouraged to Live....and maybe even yourself....Do not give up...Good profound write!


  • SeptemberFaith
    June 9, 2008
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    ... live .....