Mummy can you feel me
Kicking about in your tummy
Can you feel my heartbeat
I love you mummy
Mummy why are you crying
When you cry it makes me cry
Mummy why is my heart not beating
Mummy I will always love you
...Goodbye ...
Author notes
I am against abortion all the way but it is up to other what they wish to do with thir children nd their lives.
sorry the poem is so short i havent written in a while and i am a bit rusty to say the least.
thankyou
nightmare
A contest entry
- Abortion! Is it your choice? by ForeverLastingComa.
600 points, ended June 11, 2008, 27 entries
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This is a good poem, taking the Point of view of the unborn baby. I'm against abortion also unless the girl was raped. I don't think it is right to take a baby as a means of birth control, there's a lot of people looking for babies to adapt. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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I absolutely loved the title and the way that you ended this poem saying "goodbye".. i have to say that i liked the second stanza a lot more than the first,
"Mummy why are you crying
When you cry it makes me cry
Mummy why is my heart not beating
Mummy I will always love you"
..in your author notes you state
"I am against abortion all the way but it is up to other what they wish to do with thir children nd their lives."
however, you are saying that you are against it but still saying that it's up to the person..i find that interesting..maybe you don't know what side you're on like me..hmm..
Thank You for entering and good luck
~*ForeverLastingComa aka Leesha*~
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